| "Prelude #7" by Akira (2005-11-18) |
As you can see, Most of the effort goes to the last panel. I referenced one of fighting scenes from "Bleach" a bit. Most difficult part of this strip was deciding the order and size of panels leading up to the last panel. I ended up drawing more (smaller) panels than I originally planned. I hope I did well :)
In Japanese, Onii-chan was saying "yabai (This is bad/dangerous...)" when he was evading. I couldn't come up with a good translation. "Oh oh..." might be the closest, but doesn't have enough tension (life/death situation). Maybe "Damn!", "Shit!", or "darn it!". Hmmm...?
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