I think I did pretty well over all. Here are some of my comments.
First panel: Close up of Water with an arrow stuck. I think I drew Water and water well. I'm studying how to draw water in this Mina's chapter. Water is such a difficult object to draw.... I'm still learning...
Second panel: I need to express over all positions of Water and Mina and this picture does that well. Mina's hair is pretty too.
Third panel: Need to change camera angle from Water.... I like this camera angel since it express view from Water and shows how arrows are stuck.
Fouth panel: Idea taken from Eva. Guess which episode from :)
Fifth panel: I like over all camera angle and layout.
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