| "Rants" by Akira (2003-01-29) |
I'm pretty satisfied with today's comic strip. I like most of the panel layout. I think I drew a crossbow pretty well for second panel. I like the layout of third panel (Mina, Water, boat, background fits all well). Fourth panel where she's holding her crossbow is pretty cool too. But I should have changed a camera angle of the first panel... It looks boring because a camera angle of first and second panels are same. Maybe side view of Mina might have fit well.
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